oOo I need your openion oOo

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This is my 1st trying in writing. I hope to enjoy

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When the sky open's it's eye ..
There're no clouds that fly ..
Nor dark or baby cry ..
But a space between you and I ..

I still remember that land ..
where you touch my hand ..
Then stop and understand ..
The love that start from underground ..

I want to break the gray ..
And begin a new day ..
when the brave beats stop and say ..
I will love you everyday ..

I got a crush on you ..
I hope you feel the way that I do ..

Coz everywhere to me ..
When I close my eyes and see ..
your soul feeds mine and tell me ..
we will meet again under the tree ..

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It is a simple form of writing. Though there are rhymes.. but it is not a poem. I don't have these features to write a poem. In spite of that .. I write what I feel ..

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Dear Ranoom


Your words are very good. Write more and I will read on

Thank you for sharing with me the reader a part of yourself





With all my love
yours,
Ra3yat Saawad

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Ranoom

Privileged everywhere

Very beautiful poem Wait for the new permanent



With all my Best wishes

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ranom

thanks for ur nice words

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Your words give me the hope to keep up ..
thanks honey so much ..

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It is my pleasure to see you here ..
thanx 4 dropping in ..

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thanx 4 being here ..
thanx alot ..

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